Tuesday, 12 April 2016

1st Draft Script


Script:

Detective Berkheart walks down the stairs, camera is tracking him. He is pouring filtered coffee into a mug. Close up shot of Berkheart drinking cup of coffee.
Berkheart puts down cup of coffee on the counter in the kitchen.
Berkheart picks up a ring from a small bowl in the kitchen, he puts it on his finger.

Flashback:

A fight scene between two men, both dressed in black and are wearing hoods so you cannot see their faces. One man gets thrown to the floor, his hood comes off, close up shot of the mans face - it is the detective. Long shot shows the detective get up, fight continues between the two men, the Detective holds the other man to the ground, punches him in the face, turns him over and puts handcuffs on him, we see the Detectives ring.

Back to present day:

Raven Hearst is walking away from a dead body, medium tracking shot of her feet. Raven brings out her phone and dials a number, close up shot of her phone, the number is titled 'Detective' she holds the phone up to her ear.

Raven: "I've taken care of it, you may want to bring some one to tidy up the … mess [pauses waiting for the other person to reply] I'll see you in five"

End of scene.

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