Tuesday, 12 April 2016

2nd Draft Script


Script:

Set in the detective Burkheart's house - tracking shot of the detectives feet walking down the stairs into his kitchen - he walks through kitchen and begins to make himself a coffee.

Camera cuts to another scene of Raven walking over the legs of a dead body, she turns and looks at the body

Cuts back to the Detective, he is now drinking his coffee and sitting down.

Cuts back to raven, she walks over to her bag and gets out her phone - she dials, camera focuses on phone and we see the name 'Detective' - she calls and puts the phone to her ear.

Detective scene, his phone begins to ring, camera focuses on the phone we see 'R' appear as the calling name. We see his hand reach for it ... he picks it up and walks to the window.

Cuts back to Raven, she is also looking out the window, close up of her face while she is on the phone. There is dialogue:

Raven: "It's taken care of ... I'll see you in five"

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